Great job so far! Sonnets are tough. You should try to write things on your own, but if you're stuck, here are some tips: remember that it has to hav that da DUM da DUM da DUM da DUM da DUM sound, like Dr. Suess. "I do not like green eggs and ham. I do not like them Sam I Am." ....But in a sonnet, each line is 10 syllables, there are 14 lines, and they're often about love. However, I love you're idea for a piano. You have some very beautiful lines so far. Think about what your theme will be. (The message you are trying to convey to the reader) What do you want to show people about pianos? Remember to have a nice ending line that ties it all together. Hope that helps. Good luck!
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